TaoistImmortal中国 - Character Biography

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  1. Taoist Immortal

    Taoist Immortal Traveler

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    Username: TaoistImmortal中国
    Discord Username: TaoistImmortal
    Full Name: Lao Tze
    Nickname: Lao
    Gender: Male
    Age: 30
    Date of birth: 30/05/2378S
    Place of birth: At a house (unknown address)
    Job: Baker / Chef
    Interests and hobbies: sword-fighting, mediating and cooking
    Religious Belief: Aestheria
    Signature Items:
    • His xiphos, an expertly crafted greek sword which has been passed down for generations

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    Lao Tze was born into a family of martial arts masters. He was taught how to use bow, phalanxes, xiphos, kopis and pugios but stuck with his xiphos as he grew up. The xiphos was mastered by his grandfather, a wise man. By the age of 15, Lao had mastered the xiphos and started to train others in this field. One day, someone asked if Lao could teach them martial arts. However, they had no money but they could cook and bake. Lao trained them, in return, for learning how to cook and bake. Overtime, Lao gained a satisfaction in cooking and baking.

    Lao continued to train others, whilst learning the art of cooking and baking. He decided that he wanted to master his cooking and baking. This led to him having a busy and hectic lifestyle, it was not healthy. Lao confided in his grandfather. His grandfather told him to "be patient, and with time, things will get better". Lao never really understood the message his grandfather was trying to give. Things got more hectic. When he wasn't cooking, he was teaching.

    When he turned 28, his grandfather died of age. Lao was shook to the core by his passing. His grandfather was his closest family member and friend. Everytime he came home, he would become upset. He couldn't stand to be in his home anymore, it reminded him of his grandfather. He had to get away, somehow.

    On his travels, he over heard someone talking about an island. Lao grabbed every bit of information he could and immediately embarcked on this journey (once he got enough money).
     
  2. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hey!

    The only problems i can find with your bio is that your date of birth doesn't seem to match your age and the symbols in your MC username. Please change those.
     

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