Approved Convexus Mayamoris | The Rebel Yell

Discussion in 'Character Bios' started by Convex, Dec 11, 2019.

  1. Convex

    Convex Guest

    Username: [Convex]
    Discord Username (only if you want to be verified in the Discord group): [ConvexFM™#6837]
    Full Name: [Convexus Mayamoris]
    Nickname(s): [Convex]
    Gender: [Male]
    Age: [29]
    Date of birth: [January 7th, 2376S]
    Place of birth: [Mainland]
    Job: [Midterm Politician, Soldier]
    Interests and hobbies: [Defending the Mainland, establishing peace and tranquility || Baking, fighting, singing]
    Religious Belief: [Agnostic; https://www.minecraftfrontiers.com/wiki/index.php/Gods]
    Signature Item (s): [Embroidered Coin of Decision Making]

    Born January 7th, 2376S, Convexus Mayamoris was but a boy when his father, Revolutionary leader Vince Retari was murdered in a bloody coup. Growing up without a father, his mother quickly expended all of their fortunes on gigolos and wine. Through countless years of turmoil, abuse, and negligence, Convexus slowly grew tired of the Mainland.

    By the time Convexus was 12, his mother had long abandoned him, leaving him to fend for himself on the streets. By this time the Retari name was dead, and so with it, Convexus found his new crest, within his new mentor Adventius Mayamoris, a thief. Adventius longed for a protege to teach the sleight of hand to. Working together, they even heisted the Mainland Bank, to which they gave all the stolen money to orphanages all over the country. When he was 18, he joined the mainland military, learning the ropes of a soldier, and dipping his toes into the judicial system. It was during this time he was gifted an embroidered coin following his first court case. He has since used it to make the hardest decisions.

    Convexus, a strapping man fresh out of the Army, reunites with his old mentor. This meeting quickly turns into a tragedy. A drunken member of the Mainland Guard recognizes the look of Vince Retari, and attacks Convexus. Convexus leaps over the counter to take down the guard, but the guard quickly swings at Convexus. Without a moment's notice, Adventius dives through the sword, receiving a lethal piercing, and destroying Convexus' heart.

    Convexus, wanting a new life, decides his best move is to go to Elipdia. This has lead to his most recent endeavor, establishing the Elpidian Freedom Party, in hopes that the idea of a free Elpidia might draw supporters...
     
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  2. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hello!

    Two small issues with your bio. 1) Your bio must end with your characters travel to Elpida, so the parts of your bio regarding the heist on the Elpida Bank can’t have happened because your character is just about to travel to Elpida. 2) Your bio is a bit shorter than what we generally expect. Normally there’s around 2-3 paragraphs on your character personality and backstory, then 1-2 paragraphs on their decision to move to Elpida.

    Let me know when you’ve updated it.
     
  3. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Approved.

    Welcome to the community :D
     

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