Interesting story. There were a few minor grammatical and tense errors which I corrected for you. Apart from that, everything else is good. @tcvs...
On the forum, message him. Although since i tagged him, he should know anyway.
Thank you for paying attention to the suggestions I've given. Your bio is much better now. Contact @tcvs for access. Good luck!
Hello and welcome! Glad to see you join this wonderful server. Your bio will be checked out and any suggestions, if needed, will be given. Best of...
The events will be perfect for streaming and recording. Especially if several people record from different perspectives, it will give a nice...
Very nice bio, I really enjoyed reading it. Welcome to the server! Contact @tcvs for server access. Good luck and hope you have a great time here :)
@tcvs our new builder needs to be whitelisted.
Hi and welcome to Frontiers! In order to be accepted, you need to upload a profile picture. After that, your bio will be checked out and any...
The reason we require new players to write a biography is to make the server suitable for everyone. Biographies help us to distinguish between...
Your character has a very dark personality :) The bios good enough for server access. @tcvs should give you access soon. Have fun!
Very nice bio. I enjoyed reading it. Contact @tcvs for server access. Good luck! :)
Hey and welcome. Nice to see your interest in Frontiers. You seem to be a big fan on Minecraft, so I'm sure you'll enjoy this server. If you want...
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