Welcome to the server! This is very good bio. There are just a few small issues. Your charactar needs a full date of birth, not just a year. You...
Welcome to the server! This seems like a bio with a lot of promise, however it is a bit short. This bio should prove to very easily expandable...
Welcome to the server! This seems like a very good start to your bio, however it is a bit short. We usually ask for about 2-3 paragraphs. Also so...
Now that i look at it again, there is a problem with his birth date. If she's 23 years old then she would have been born in the year 2382S (the S...
Ok technicallly it is true, so you can keep that i think, but the other points still stand. I would maybe have written about working at a harbour...
Mistererwin comes back and fixes the combat bugs. Sadly, in doing so, he makes everything else buggy to the point of it being unplayable. But hey,...
Hi, welcome to the server! The story is pretty good. There is some info missing though. If you put this at the top and fill in the blanks you...
Very nice! alir99 should be on tommorow to check and probably approve this.
Welcome to the server! This is a very good story. Some information is lacking though, if you put this at the top and fill in the blanks you'll...
Welcome to the server! This is I good start to your bio but there are a few problems with it. Firstly, if your character is 20 years old i think...
Welcome to the server! Very nice story! I see no problems with it other than it being maybe a bit short. Alir99 will be on sometime tomorrow to...
Welcome to the server! This is a pretty good backstory, however some key information still lacks. We need a full character name (first/last name),...
Welcome to the server! This is a good start, but I don't think it's going to be long enough. Usually we expect about 3 paragraphs. Also some key...
Truly amazing bio! No doubt in my mind Alir99 will accept this. Welcome to the server! Feel free to check out the discord, theres always something...
I love this bio! The changes you made are amazing and I really like the ending. It's also really nice that you put in some real roman military...
Granted, but the food becomes so cheap that all the stores and farmers loose all their income. Food production grinds to a halt, the economy...
Had to break it down in multiple posts because it was to long. I've been writing this for 8 hours and I might have gone a bit overboard. It's a...
With nothing left for me in the place I used to call my home and consumed with grief I returned to the forest knowing I would never be able to...
Username: eragon43 Discord Username: swordlord43#7848 Full Name: Robin Moore Gender: male Age:18 Date of birth:15 january 2387S Place of birth: A...
I'm still finding it hard to process that MF is really coming back!. I mean, after all these years, it's really coming back! I'm so excited!
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