Welcome to ther server! This is a very nice start to your bio, but its bit short. Could you add at least 1-2 paragraphs more backstory? If you...
Nice! This bio is approved!
Welcome to the server! This bio is pretty good. It reads very well and it's nicely written. However there are some things I would like to see...
Welcome to the server! Amazing bio, very well written an certainly long enough. Simply said: approved!
Awesome! This is a very nice read. I look forward to seeing you on the server! This bio is accepted!
The wiki is in the process of being updated. There is some information on there but a lot of it is outdated. You are free to do any job you want,...
Welcome to the server! This bio is very well written and I see no problems with anything lore related. Just know that a sailor/cartographer job...
Welcome to the server! It might be a bit short but I love this bio! You'll fit right in it think and im looking forward to many lengthy...
Thats good, nice bio! It is now officially approved!
Welcome ot the server! This is a good bio. The backstory might be a bit short, but it seems as though your have your character well thought out....
same as irl
Welcome to the server! This bio is amazing! Reads very well, very detailed and you have obviously read up on the lore. In short: This bio is...
Done, but as there are technically an infinite amount of jobs possible, there are an infinite amout of players. Suddenly and infinite amount of...
Some ideas: How was she trained/raised? How was her first assignment? How did it go? what did she steal? What was so special about nearly being...
Awesome! Zelda is right, this is an awesome bio. This bio has been approved!
Hi! This bio looks very good. It's very creative and it's apparent that you did some research for this bio. However it's just a bit to short. If...
Welcome to the server! This bio is truly amazing. It's very well written, reads like a novel and it clearly shows you have spent some time on the...
It's not really missing information. It's just a lot easier for the people who have to check it and for the people who would want to read your bio...
Hi! Nice to see you changed it, however it's still a bit to short. We expect about double this at the minimum. Also there are some grammatical...
Welcome to the server! Very nice bio, one small problem though: if he's 21 years old, he would have been born in the year 2384S
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