Welcome to the server! This a very good bio. Congragulations are in order, your approved!
Awesome! Approved!
Welcome to the server. This is a good start to your bio. However there are some problems. - If he was 24 years old then he would have been born...
Welcome to the server. This is a good start to your bio. However there are some problems: Firstly we use a diiferent year system (see...
Welcome to the server! This is a good bio, however there are some problems. Firstly, If you are 26 years old you would have been born in the year...
Welcome to the server! This is a very good bio. It's certainly long enough and it reads very well. However it feels a bit to modern. Keep in mind...
Welcomet to the server! This is a good start to your bio, however it is a bit too short. I need at least 2 more paragrapghs to approve this. If...
What I meant was that it seemed as though you thought that Elpida was located on the mainland. Anyway it's fixed now This bio is approved!
Welcome to the server! This is a pretty good bio. Normally I ask for a bit more backstory on how he was raised but this bio is already more than...
If you need some inspiration, here are some ideas: Maybe add a story about your mother? How did he train you? What weapons did he train you in?...
take a look at this link: https://minecraftfrontiers.com/forums/threads/recommended-character-biography-layout.156/
Nice! Amazing read. I'm approving this bio!
Welcome to the server! This is a good start to you bio, however there are some problems with it. Firstly could you remove the poseidon character...
Very nice! This bio is approved, hope to see you soon on the server!
Didn't realize you guys played ksp, i love that game
The changes you made are very good. It is now definetly long enough, however there 1 more problem. Elpida is a city located on the recently...
Awesome, this bio is approved!
Welcome to the server! This is a good start to your bio, however it is a bit short. Could you add at least 2 more paragraphs (about the same size...
Hi! This is a nice start to your bio, however there are some things that need to changed. Your bio is a bit too short, but this shouldn't prove to...
Welcome to the server! This is a very good bio! I really liked reading it, however i did see some mistakes. Near the end you write: "Surely...
Separate names with a comma.
