Alrighty then: Approved!
Nice! You misspelled Elpida a few times in your bio. I'm afraid its still a bit too short could you add 2 more paragraphs at the minimum? Some...
Welcome to the server! This is a good story! It is however a bit short, and some information is missing. I would like at least a paragraph more....
The changes you made are good, but it' still a bit too short. Could your write at least 1 more paragraph? Some inspiration: How was he raised,...
I love this bio. You made some good changes to it. I really like the fishing rod thing too, it has something wierdly comical. Approved!
Welcome to the server Very good bio. Im going to approve this, but you do have to remeber that anything magical is not allowed. As long as this...
Welcome to the server! This is a good bio! It is however a bit short. Could you add at least 1 more paragraph? Some inspiration: How was he...
Nice! Approved!
Awesome! Approved!
Welcome to the server! Holy duck, this bio is amazing! Seriously Approved!
Nice! One small thing remains though: could you remove the helicopter drawing part? Maybe you could replace it with a drawing of a tree or the...
Hi! Very nice bio.Some small changes need to be made however. Could you add an S to the year (2379S)? Also, can you give your character a loast name?
Allrighty! This is a really good bio, nice and long. Approved!
Welcome to the server. Amazing bio, i really liked reading it. Approved!
Welcome! This bio looks very good. It may be a bit short so if you could add just a bit more that would be nice. Also we need a specific date of...
Hi! Awesome bio! It reads very well and its certainly long enough. In short: Approved!
Hi! This bio looks pretty good. However some changes need to be made: It is a bit short, could you add at least 1 more paragraph? While the server...
Hi! This bio looks pretty good. It is however just a bit too short. Could you add at least 1 more paragraph? You also need to write about how you...
Unfortunatly its still just a bit to short, could you add 1 more paragraph? Some inspiration: How was he raised? How did his training go? why was...
Nice! Its still a bit short, but i think i can approve this Congratz!
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