Job: Leader of the people Signature item: Long sword Hobbies: Martial arts and Swordsmanship Age: 18 Beliefs: Legaros, although sometimes tempted by Phaedron Yves DuRisseau was born on the mainland, being raised by only his mother, Yves found a father figure in a local preacher, who worshipped Legaros. Yves is a strong believer in justice Justice and wishes to bring Justice and peace to the world. Yves had to work his whole life in order to support his mother. He worked at the factories carrying equipment. Yves was not fast but he became very strong. He was always very well respected as the rest of the boys his age were much smaller and afraid of him and the adults were afraid if his mind since he studied diplomacy and mathematics with the preacher. Finally Yves gained enough to money the mainland leave his home town and earn himself the power to create a just world, although his morals may be skewed to accomplish this goal.
Welcome to the server! This is a good start, but I don't think it's going to be long enough. Usually we expect about 3 paragraphs. Also some key information is missing. Your character needs a full name and date of birth. Keep in mind that factories do not exist in this world. This server is set in ancient greek/roman culture/technology. These are some useful links for writing your bio: https://minecraftfrontiers.com/forums/threads/recommended-character-biography-layout.156/ https://minecraftfrontiers.com/forums/threads/writing-a-biography-guide.153/ Also feel free to check out some of the approved bios for some inspiration: https://minecraftfrontiers.com/forums/section/character-bios.40/ If you have any questions feel free to contact me, org36, Alir99 or any other member of staff. The discord is always open.
Ok technicallly it is true, so you can keep that i think, but the other points still stand. I would maybe have written about working at a harbour or something.
Hello and welcome! Like mentioned by eragon, your bio needs at least 3-4 paragraphs in order to be accepted and quite a bit of the info required are missing. Check the links that he posted. Good luck!
