Full Name: VoicelessCruelty Nickname(s):VCruelty Gender: Male Age: 21 Date of birth: 2364S Place of birth: Psygovia(Land of the Fish People) Current residence: Mainland Job: Soldier Interests and hobbies: War Religious Belief: Ignarus Signature Item (s): Nether Star My name is VoicelessCruelty. I believe in the God Ignarus though I was born under the water. Though, I believed there was nothing in the water. No opportunity. No saving grace. I wanted something more so I purged my family for there sins as they suffered through the fires of hell. They were sinned for the crimes against me and I believe that I will purge the world through the destruction of it. I will cause war throughout and the world and will no longer live under a world of Aestheria. Fire. Destruction. War. All things I believe in and the Holy One (Ignarus) has chosen me as his disciple. I will cleanse the world of its sins and through His word I will bring vengeance to all those who stand in my way. He has taught me the art of war. The art which is so beautiful that it brings chaos. I wish to show all who stand before me its lovely symphony. I will wreak havoc on all believers of Aestheria, Mentora, Metus, Legaros and Phaedron for all their acts of cruelty on Ignarus. I will bring vengeance down on all non-believers for their Gods' acts of sin on Ignarus. I have learnt from them how to fight and Ignarus will guide me towards justice and I will slay everyone. I have come to this island because I have found a teacher who I believe can teach me the way of Ignarus. He is said to be one of the greatest believers of the fiery God but he is said to be just a myth. I came to see whether I could discover whether it was actually truth. It has been told that he slew the great Jaijingshin, the one whose power rivals Ignarus. I must learn the arts from this greater being and I must use this art to purge the land of all of its sins. I will learn his ways and enhance them. My final test will be to slay this being while in combat.
The biography is written in an acceptable way. Your character is presented in a very one-sided way though. The feeling I get is that they want to attack everyone who follows gods other than Ignarus. That might result in problems when interacting with others, as you are very likely to meet people who don't follow Ignarus. We are trying to promote positive roleplay between all the players - everyone is expected to blend into the bigger picture. In other words, do you believe your character, presented as it is now, will be able to be part of the community? Players attacking others regularly, without being provoked, is not something we really want to encourage.
