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  1. SiebenSamurai

    SiebenSamurai Verified Traveler

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    Full Name: Novelius Morak
    Nickname: Siebensamurai
    Gender: Male
    Age: 16
    Date of birth: 3rd March 2389S
    Place of birth: In a hideout of unknown thieves in the Southern Part of the Mainland.
    Current residence: Stays in the thieves' hideout
    Job: thief
    Religious Belief: somewhat believes in Phaedron
    Interests and hobbies: Likes money, treasures and cats. He dreams of having all the riches in the world.
    Signature Item: A dagger he got from his parents before they died.

    Backstory:

    In a certain hideout of two unknown thieves were a man and woman, who were in love and bore a child.
    Although they were thieves they raised their child with care befitting a father and mother.
    Over the years they thought their child everything they knew about thieving, how much they dreamed of having all the money in the world and also about the god they worshipped, Phaedron.
    When the child was 12, he was already a splendid thief but he also was very fixated on treasures, money and the like so he trained to being a famous and also rich thief. Although he really liked money he also wanted to have his parents live a comfortable live when they grow old.

    On his 12th birthday his parents gifted him his own dagger and brought him to a town not too far away from their hideout to go steal.
    However, when they came to town there was a very influental and also very, very rich nobleman in a carriage with only one guard and a lot of treasures.
    Because the child's parents were very greedy, thought that they had enough ability to steal some of his treasures and also wanted to show off their skills to their son, told him to stay back and attempted to rob the nobleman.
    The only miscalculation they made was that this guard was the strongest warrior in all of Patraeia.
    Before they even knew it he had already killed them.
    After seeing his parents get killed from afar, he ran back to the hideout and thought while grasping the dagger he got from his parents before they died that he'll fulfill his parent's dream and that he'll have to go to Elpida to fulfill it because he had heard that it was a place of unimaginable wealth and that the palaces there were made out of gold. Although they were just rumors he felt deep down in his heart that he had to go there in order to fulfill his parents' dream.
    After saving money for 4 years he finally had enough to go there and set out on his journey.
     
    Last edited: May 17, 2016
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  2. Nico

    Nico Known Citizen

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    I like this, it's a good story.
    And just as a tip: I don't know how strict they are about it, but you don't have an avatar yet.
     
  3. SiebenSamurai

    SiebenSamurai Verified Traveler

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    how do I change it?
     
  4. Saphiria

    Saphiria Retired Staff Retired Staff

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    Uploading an avatar is super simple! All you need to do is follow the steps below:
    1. First, you will hover your cursor over your user name at the top right of the window. This will cause a drop down to expand. Simply click on "Avatar" and a window will pop up.
    2. Then you can quite simply click "Choose File."
    3. This will allow you to pick an avatar image from our computer. You can drag the image around to frame it as you see fit. Then click "Okay."
    That is it! It is recommended that you use an image that is at least 200x200 pixels. I hope this helps, and have a great day!

    Cheers,
    Saphiria

    P.S. If you do not understand those instructions, here is a nifty video showing how to do it (a slightly different method, but same outcome):
     
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  5. SiebenSamurai

    SiebenSamurai Verified Traveler

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    thanks!
     
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  6. Saphiria

    Saphiria Retired Staff Retired Staff

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    No problem at all! If you need any more help, just ask.
     
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  7. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hello and welcome.
    Good bio so far. At the end where you wrote that he had to go to Elpida to fulfill his parents dream. Can you expand on why he went to Elpida. Also let it be noted that if your character is a thief, he probably won't be on very good terms with the other characters and npcs, so be careful.
    After you've added a bit more on his decision to go to Elpida, let me know so I take another look at it.
    Good luck.

    Contact @tcvs for your badge and server access.
    Good luck!
     
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  8. SiebenSamurai

    SiebenSamurai Verified Traveler

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  9. Xalveris

    Xalveris Known Citizen

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    Welcome to the Frontierses of Minceraft! Bio is a bit short in my opinion. *grammar nazi activate* RUN. ON. SENTENCES. EVERRYWHEERREE!!!!!
    they they?
     

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