Approved GiantLion11's Character Biography

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  1. GiantLion11

    GiantLion11 Citizen

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    Full Name: Addison Jay
    Nickname(s): None
    Gender: Male
    Age: 23
    Date of birth: March 1, 2382S
    Place of birth: Mainland Patraeia, in a small, rural, forest town
    Current residence: Elpida
    Job: Blacksmith
    Interests and hobbies: Smithing, Swordsmanship, Construction, Invention
    Religious Belief: Is not very religious, however he favors Legaros over the other Gods, and has respect for Marventa for delivering him safe passage to the colony.
    Signature Item (s): The smithing tools of his master, known as The Fugues, which were extremely reliable, and could work under extremely hot conditions.

    Background -

    Addison Jay was born to a decently well-off household in a very small, rural town. His parents were caring for him, and
    they encouraged his constant tinkering and inventing in their home. He made many primitive things such as bows and arrows, throwable spears, axes, and hoes all out of the various pieces of wood his lumberjack father could manage to bring home every day. At the age of 10, Addison told his parents that when he grows up, he wants to be a blacksmith, and he told them how amazing it was they could make fine blades out of nothing but chunks of metal. After another three years of showing how much he was interesting in the profession, Addison's parents realized he could never fulfill his dreams by staying in the rural town, so they signed him into a seven-year long apprenticeship with a well-known blacksmith in the larger nearby city. So at 14, he left his town and parents forever, off to learn the ways of blacksmithing.

    Upon arriving at the city, Addison immediately begun work with his master, Henry Smith, and learned many things concerning the profession of being a blacksmith, and various swordsman skills. Addison became quite a capable resident in both of these fields during the seven years of his apprenticeship, and he bonded with his master, who became a prevalent father-figure in his life.

    Smith had a set of tools he named The Fugues which quite outstandingly could withstand the brutal conditions of blacksmithing for the decades that he had ownership of them. Addison admired these tools, which were as strong as diamond compared to the basic iron ones he had to work with (the iron tools tended to break on a monthly basis). The Fugues and his mentor crafted many great blades, and it was for this reason Addison admired both.

    After completing his apprenticeship, Addison was hired up by his old master for a full-time job. This job lasted a single year, during which Henry Smith's health quickly deteriorated, and by his death it was discovered he had no direct family, and the majority of his wealth and belongings were sent to Addison (The Fugues were to go to Smith's adult nephew, for they were family heirlooms). Addison was heartbroken over the death of his mentor, and not even a month later he learned his parents had died wealth less, and spent their last, nonliving penny on the graves they were buried in.

    Addison sold off the last of his belongings, and using the wealth he inherited he payed for a trip to the colonies, hoping there he would be able to start life anew, with the depression of the family deaths behind him.
     
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  2. Saphiria

    Saphiria Retired Staff Retired Staff

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    Again, welcome to the community of Minecraft Frontiers! I love your biography, and wish you the best of luck. @Alir99 will be getting to you shortly to help you in the process of getting your bio approved and joining the server.
     
  3. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hello and welcome! Very interesting bio you have here. A bit sad though, what with the death of your character's mentor and parents. But no worries, it was very well written out.
    The current year in Elpida is 2385S, so if your character is 23 years old, they should be born in 2362S. I've changed this for you as it wasn't a major issue.
    Welcome to the community!
    Contact @tcvs to get access to the server and your prototype badge.
    Best of luck! =)
     
  4. GiantLion11

    GiantLion11 Citizen

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    Thanks so much for the compliments and approval! I'll be sure to contact tcvs right away.

    Concerning my character's age, I was basing it off the Wiki page (http://www.minecraftfrontiers.com/wiki/index.php/History_Lesson) where it says the year is 2405S, so that should be changed whenever you guys have the time to get around to it.
     
  5. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Ahh sorry apologises on my behalf. Got the dates mixed up :D
    You are correct about the dates, I changed it back.
     

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