Username: Fisheo Discord Username: Fish#7827 Full Name: Bill Waters Nickname(s): Billy Gender: Male Age: 18 Date of birth: 234S (?) Place of birth: Mainland, Small fishing village/harbour. Job: Fisherman/Traveling Merchant Interests and hobbies: Fishing, Bargaining, Helping others. Religious Belief: Believes in Marventa Signature Item (s): Fishing Rod with the name "Betty" carved into the wooden handle Story Paragraphs: Bill was an ordinary kid, born in a small fishing town to a poor family. His father died a few years after he was born, due to liver failure. This was inevitable, as his father was replaced his love for his children with a bottle. His mother was the kindest soul you would ever meet, always helping Bill learn about whatever he wanted. At 11, his mother passed away from cancer. From there on, he was raised at a temple of Marventa, the locals taking care of him. By 15, he was fishing to provide for himself and his best friend, Betty. They felt like they were perfect for each other, until 2 years later when she died due to childbirth complications. As soon as he turned 18, he set off on a boat with the last bit of money he had, and set off to make the ones he lost proud.
Alright so date of birth needs to be fixed. you can do a real world date and month and if he's 18 then he would be born in 2387S. The bio is also really short. If you could at least triple it. you need 2 paragraphs of background and another one for your decision to move to Elpida. Fix these things and let me know
