Discord: @Bob Ross#0003 BackgroundI was born October 7 2362S on a small private island my parents owned. It was just off the Mainland . I was named Daniel O'Connor Zell after my grandfather. I grew up playing swords with my father, we used sticks as swords. When I was 7 my father gave me a wooden sword carved from birch. He told me I would be a great warrior one day and follow in his footsteps. At the age of 10, I cut down my tree and mined my first iron ore. When I was 15 I made my first iron sword. This sword was the best sword I had ever made it was very lucky no matter where I stuck the target always bled. At the age of 18 my father gave me his helmet and said may it forever protect you, he also gave me a series of expensive looking knives. When I turned 19 I left the island to become a better warrior. On my quest, I met a lot of people. I was hard to defeat in battle because my lucky sword and helmet of eternal protection, But me not being very strong made it difficult to beat anyone in battle too. Many people called me The Harbinger because I was hard to beat in battle. When I reached the age of 21 I came to worship multiple gods their names were Phaedron, Metus, Legaros, Ignarus, and Marventa. At the age of 23, I received a vision while praying at a shrine to Ignarus but I shrugged it off. Later I received another vision when I was sleeping in a small town by the ocean it told me to go to Elpida and I shrugged it off again. When I received another vision while praying to a shrine of Metus I finally decided to travel to Elpida. On my way to Elpida, I lost my Lucky Iron Sword, Helmet Of Eternal Protection and knife collection when the crate they were in fell into the ocean I haven't seen them since. The captain of the ship I was sailing in said we will reach Elpida in a couple weeks, so I went to sleep and waited.
Bio is coming along nicely. There are a few spelling and grammatical mistakes, which need to be corrected. Don't be afraid to add more to your bio, it is really enjoyable for me to read everyone's bio. Also try and not make your character the best in battle, as your character shouldn't have any superhuman skills or immense power. What you've written now is fine, so keep it like that. Best of luck.
Yes I know. I wrote afterwards that what you've written is fine. What I meant is that you don't make your character any stronger.
A bit of a shorter bio, but that doesn't mean it's bad. Welcome! Is your forum name Eragon with an 'o' in the middle? Good job Alir.
