Approved Character Biography: Maka Evans

Discussion in 'Character Bios' started by bball2525, Dec 19, 2019.

  1. bball2525

    bball2525 Verified Traveler

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    Hello! My Minecraft username is bball2525.

    My parents left me in Patraeia when I was eleven years old, looking for new opportunity in Elpida for my baby brother whom my mother was pregnant with. They were lower middle class, but I didn't care about the expensive things when I was with my family. We had a good relationship before they left and the letters my parents would send me every so often were filled with love and their wishes that I would come live with them again soon. One problem: I am terrified of the ocean. They would send me funds every so often to ensure I had a place to live, but my food and clothing I have had to pay for myself since they left. I worked odd jobs for a few years at any place that would accept me, until finally settling down at a *general store* when I turned 15. The owner of the place is very accepting and would give me extra money than I was owed when he could tell I wasn't doing well. I saw him as a father figure, in replacement of the one I somewhat felt had left and replaced me. I have sore feelings about that day when they told me they were leaving. My name is a combination of my mothers and fathers names; my mothers name was Marial and my fathers was Kareem. They also raised me to follow Aestheria, but I developed a dislike of Marventa for my own obvious reasons.

    One day, while cleaning up the store, I realized it had been a few months since I had received a letter from my parents. I was worried that perhaps something had happened to them. When I shared these troubles with the owner of the store, he gave me a warm smile and hugged me tight, before grabbing a money pouch from his robes and handing me enough money for the journey to Elpida. I realized he knew I needed to be reunited with my parents, meaning it would be a long or the last time we would ever see each other. I packed my things and headed off, the beautifully embroidered pouch of the store owners held tightly in my hands which was an item I promised to carry with me for the rest of my life. I was sad to go and knew I had to do what was expected of me, but my life was never going to be the same as it had been... plus I had to ride a boat.
    Username: bball2525
    Discord Username: bball2525#5505
    Full Name: Maka Evans
    Nickname(s): McFly, Mayo
    Gender: Female
    Age: 16
    Date of birth: March 24, 2389S
    Place of birth: Mainland
    Job: Worked at a General Store (Trader)
    Interests and hobbies: Loves animals and collecting things that look nice. I also like having a safety net of money because I'm scared of going into poverty again.
    Religious Belief: I am a bit introverted, but I like the confidence that Aestheria gives me in myself. I am a devote worshiper and see her as the maternal figure I missed out on. I also would probably sacrifice myself for Aestheria with the simple snap of her fingers.
    Signature Item (s): An embroidered pouch with rich coloring meant for *money* that the store owner gave me before I left him to find my family in Elpida. It means a lot to me because I felt like he was the only family I've had in a long time.
     
    Last edited: Dec 21, 2019
  2. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hiya!

    I like what you've written so far. However in this state i cannot approve it yet. Check this post out for help regarding bios: https://minecraftfrontiers.com/forums/threads/writing-a-biography-guide.153/.

    This part is extremely crucial and necessary for each bio:
    Username: [Your character's Minecraft username]
    Discord Username (only if you want to be verified in the Discord group): [Discord Name and #]
    Full Name: [Your character Name]
    Nickname(s): [Character Nicknames]
    Gender: [Character Gender]
    Age: [Character Age]
    Date of birth: [Date the character was born, current year is 2405S]
    Place of birth: [Location of where Character was born e.e Mainland]
    Job: [Characters current job]
    Interests and hobbies: [Characters Interests and Hobbies
    Religious Belief: [Religious beliefs of the character; https://www.minecraftfrontiers.com/wiki/index.php/Gods]
    Signature Item (s): [Signature items that have a meaning to the character]

    Fill it out and edit it into your bio and maybe add a bit more to the bio itself. If you need any help or advice, do not hesitate to ask us.

    Best of luck!
     
  3. bball2525

    bball2525 Verified Traveler

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    Hello again, sorry for taking so long to make the changes. Thanks for the comments and I hope it is up to standard this time :D
     
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  4. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Yup!

    Thanks for your cooperation :D
     

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