Username – will_9278 Discord name – Wilhelm#9316 Full character name – Arthur Wellesley Nickname – Arthur “the eagle” Wellesley Gender – male Age - 21 Date of birth – 12th May 2384S Place of birth – Mainland Job – Vigilante mercenary but remains just and honest no matter what. Interests and hobbies – fishing, sword drilling, whittling Religious belief – I pray to Legaros Signature items – The family sword, taken from my father, named ‘Lightning flash’. A One-handed longsword, renowned for its ability to strike fast at opponents with ‘lightning’ force, hence the name. Story Paragraphs – Raised with a not too uncomfortable upbringing, as the only child and only son of the master at arms for the Dal Terion Noble family, training daily and forming a great bond with the second son, Castalan. The parents of the Dal Terion family were killed by highwaymen and Castalan’s brother became the lord (4 years ago), to the dismay of other more distant family members who desired power. Castalan sought council with me with the death of his parents, and we became inseparable and a formidable fighting duo. There was a rebellion (1 year ago), and the first son of the family was killed as well as my father, trying to protect the two of us so that we could escape. It was here that my father gave me Lightning flash in his dying breaths, so that I could protect myself. As an exemplary swordsman, who had drilled daily with Castalan, we both decided to take up work as mercenaries, but had no fear to step into situations to enforce moral justice, as a devout followers of Legaros. We also dream of becoming esteemed knights, so regularly quest for rare and powerful items so that one day we can achieve this goal. As Castalan is defending himself from assassins, being the last threat to the power of the usurper, both of us are escaping the mainland to find a haven in Elipia, with the hope of one day returning to where we belong. In the meantime, we shall both do what is necessary to keep this world, peaceful.
Alrighty, I'm Talon(Blake Redding) and I'll be handling you and Josephs bios. I like the idea of linking the 2, very cool. First off, the sword seems to fall under the category of "Magical/OP" Items and is therefore not allowed. If you want to take out its "Lightning fast abilities" and trade for something like a cosmetic detail that'd be much appreciated. For instance, my character uses a sword with a blade that has rippling effect like fire when light bounces off it. Makes it unique yet not super powerful or magical. Concerning the backround, I would like to see it a bit longer. maybe another 4 sentences spread around it. Just a bit more detail really.Other than that, looks good. Fix those couple things and then let me know!
