"if all of the assassins and thieves pray before their objectives, the followers have chose that there is no need for such actions, especially if it may draw attention to themselves." You need to uppercase the "if" in the last sentence of this page.
I will italicize and bold anything that I believe is incorrect. link link I believe this one should say contribute to the components though I am not 100% sure. link
The first, second, and fourth errors have all been amended! That third one is fine as is. Thanks for your help, and if you see anything else, please let me know.