Approved Character Bio of Azaria Lelouch

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  1. JayR

    JayR Verified Traveler

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    Full Name: Azaria Lelouch
    Nickname(s): Azzy
    Gender: Male
    Age: 19
    Date of Birth: 23/08/2386S
    Place of Birth: Mainland
    Job: Craftsman in Training ( New to Craftsmanship )
    Interests and hobbies: Interested in learning more and more crafts, at the same time to explore the vast world. Hoping to rise in the ranks.
    Religious Beliefs: Legaros and Marventa, although respects all Gods and their followers except Phaedron.
    Signature Items: A small dagger, crafted by himself as the first thing he'd ever crafted, and a pen of Azarias' dead mother, a lucky charm who he cherishes.

    Azaria grew up in a small, far town from Elpida. He only ever had his father, who helped him grow up throughout the years of his education. The only thing he knew about his mother was that she died the moment Azaria was born. His father had made sure to take great care of Azaria to fulfill his wifes' wishes, he works as a craftsman who crafts whatever his clients need. After floundering around, trying many different professions, he then decided to follow in his fathers footsteps. Becoming a Craftsman in Training!

    His father helped him as much as he could, Azaria helps out with his father, as well as smaller jobs for his level. Around his town, he helped out people as much as he could, he became very well known(only in his town) and he progressed more and more, although not enough to become an official Craftsman. He tried to find anyone who could help out, but his father really was the only one who had any knowledge of craftsmanship. After much contemplation, he finally came to the decision that he would set out on a journey to Elpida to learn more things no matter how much he must explore.

    Everywhere he went, Azaria made sure to bring with him his trusty dagger. Simple, but very handy, he spent a while making this dagger and is an encouragement charm that tells him that if you just put effort, you could do anything. He made sure to keep it safe, checking on it everyday as it was the first thing he ever made, one of the two items he cherishes the most. Although, that wasn't his most important item. Even though he never knew his mother, he wanted to know more and more about her, even if it meant just keeping a small black pen of hers. She was his mother and he wanted to make sure that he was close to her, no matter what. It was a lucky charm to him, for safe journeys and just knowing that she's right behind him wherever he goes.

    The whole town had sent him off with a massive goodbye. He then set off to the docks of his land, and sat on the ship excited to find new things, everywhere he goes. Provided with enough money for two weeks, he was confident that his adventures would go fine. Thinking about his town who he had now left, he left in happiness of the thought that everyone is with him.
     
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  2. org36

    org36 Citizen Ambassador

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    Current year is 2405S, so if your character is 19 years old, his birth year would be 2386S.

    You'll also need to write a bit more for your story paragraphs - I notice that they don't include your signature items in them. You could try to incorporate your signature items into your story paragraphs, giving some more backstory to them than a simple description

    Good luck~
     
  3. JayR

    JayR Verified Traveler

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    Oh, I just saw. That was just a rushed mistake by me, I actually meant to do 2386S instead of 2086S. Thanks for the feedback, I fixed the DOB to 2386S and made a paragraph about some history about the two items and the importance of them to him.
     
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  4. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Very nice bio!

    Welcome to the community :D
     

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