Approved Polemo tázo Bio

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  1. DeathTheReaperz

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    DeathTheReaperz's Character Bio

    Username: DeathTheReaperz
    Discord Username (only if you want to be verified in the Discord group): deaththereaperz
    Full Name: Polemo tázo
    Nickname(s): mo
    Gender: Male
    Age: 21
    Date of birth: 12/05/2384S
    Place of birth: Mainland
    Job: Blacksmith/Craftsman
    Interests and hobbies: Forging, crafting, Artistry Philosophy
    Religious Belief: Aestheria
    Signature Item (s): Engraved dagger Elpízo forged by his GrandFather

    Background

    Born on the main land Polemo was raised by his Grandfather Kalos, he was talk ways of craftsmanship and blacksmithing whilst often pursuing thought and philosophy among his friends. This obsession followed well into his works, often implementing philosophical symbolism in his pieces. These ideals however contended with the ideals of some with local people of influence who considered these pursuits of wisdom unworthy of someone of his class. This resulted in Polemo getting in trouble throughout his youth.

    Kalos however did not attempt to sway Polemo from these pursuits in any way, if anything encouraging it. Kalos otten would tell tales and teachings of old Philosophers. One day whilst noting some ideas Polemo began to get bullied by some high class kids whom beat him and and spat on him remarking that he's lucky to be a freed man.

    At the age of 21 he held his grandfathers dying hand hand as his families knowledgeable heritage and fall from grace was revealed, Kalos told Polemo to use the last of what little money they had left to leave the mainland and make a life for himself. And so at his Grandfathers Last wish he set off to Elpida to begin his life anew.
     
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  2. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Welcome!

    I like what you’ve written so far, but it is really short and I can’t really approve it in this state. Please add a bit more about your character and hopefully we’ll get you approved soon!
     
  3. DeathTheReaperz

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    hows this?
     
  4. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Can you please change the part about Spartans and Athenians please.

    When you do, i will approve your bio.
     
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    changed it, anything i need to change now
     
  7. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Perfect!

    Your bio is now approved.
     

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