Approved Ivanov van Luxbrugs (GamergoTV) Biography

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  1. Gamergo

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    GamergoTV's Character Bio

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    Discord Username (only if you want to be verified in the Discord group): Gamergo (PC) #2974
    Full Name: Ivanov van Luxbrug
    Nickname(s): Ivanov
    Gender: Male
    Age: 23
    Date of birth:16.03.2383S
    Place of birth: Mainland
    Job: Blacksmith
    Interests and hobbies: Reading, exploring, cooking
    Religious Belief: Metus
    Signature Item (s): Ring of Luxbrug

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    Background

    Ivanov van Luxbrug grew up in a stable home. His family was rich due to his fathers skill as a merchant but he was not a spoiled child. His parents would gift him nothing that he didn't work for. He learned reading, writing and mathematics from a private mentor his father could afford. Ivanov grew up as the one who would one day inherit his fathers business. His father would try to teach him the tricks of the trade but Ivanov had no real interests in traveling and selling all kinds of goods. He wanted to make these goods. As Ivanov and his mother one day passed a blacksmith, Ivanov was instantly hooked by the masterful craftsmanship and beautiful metalworks. He knew that this was what he truly wanted. Even though they where not happy, his parents allowed Ivanov to learn from this blacksmith.

    Oh what a wonderful future it could have been. But an old friend of his father betrayed him and ruined the reputation of the family van Luxbrug by accusing his Ivanov's father of dealing on the black market. His family lost most of their wealth and their status. With what they had left Ivanov's parents send him of to make a new start in Elpida and bring their family back to glory.
     
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  2. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hello and welcome!

    A pretty good bio, however some changes are needed. 1) Please add a full date of birth (as in day and month) and the years have an S at the end. 2) The part about the Emperor needs to be changed as your character or relatives of your character should not have any part in any official lore of the world.

    Let us know when you’ve updated it!
     
  3. Gamergo

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    Good evening,
    Thank you so much for your feedback! I just changed the things you wanted me to change. Is it ok now?
     
  4. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    That's great, thank you!

    Welcome to the community!
     

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