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  1. SickSnickers66

    SickSnickers66 Verified Traveler

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    Full Name: Sintal Arenforth

    Nickname(s): Sin

    Gender: Male

    Age: 20

    Date of birth: 28th August 2385S

    Place of birth: The edge of a forest on Mainland

    Job: Hunter, explorer.

    Interests and hobbies: Traveling with his Brother Jexal, Hunting

    Religious Belief: Marventa

    Signature Item (s): a blue necklace that resembles the ocean, and reminds me that the Goddess Marventa is always watching over us


    Born as the only child of Meredith and Joel Arenforth, He was taught from a young age the importance of Hunting, gathering and comradery. At the age of 5, him and his Mother were out in the fields collecting food for the night dinner, when he looks off into the sun setting sky to see what looks to be a star. the star was glowing and seemed to be getting closer, that’s when he realises what is happening. As thousands of more glowing stars appear behind the first, his mother screams “BAAAANDIIIIIITTS!!! ”. A thunderous bombardment of flaming arrows plummet from the sky, a scorching blanket of flames and piercing arrows devastate the fields. 3 arrows pierce Meredith’s chest as Sintal watched. just before the arrows hit Sin, Joel Arenforth comes barreling towards Sintal. picking him up and sprinting toward the river, Joel has tears cascading down his face as he realises that he isn’t the only one who has witnessed the only women they love die.

    as they escape through the dense forest, the flaming arrows have caught the trees alight, they are now running through a raging bush fire. as the flames steadily begin to surround the two, they can’t seem to find a way out. but Joel spots a clearing up ahead, they run. they run towards the clearing narrowly dodging falling burnt trees. but then, one trees falls and lands on Sintal leg. Joel rips his son out from beneath the flaming log, tearing off his right leg. Sintal passes out.


    As Sintal awakens he finds himself with a wooden stump, where his right leg should be. his father explains what had happened and how they barely escaped the raid of Bandits. a few years later when out hunting, Joel and Sintal finds a boy, this boys name is Jexal, Joel adopts him and raises him along side Sintal. Sintal and Jexal soon bonded as brothers and nothing could separate them. They all continued to live isolated from the rest of the mainland out of fear of war and violence. Yet despite not being allowed to interact with the outside world Sintal and his brother always yearned for it, they would begin travelling just a little further every time he went out to hunt, slowly but surely over time exploring every inch of the forest that they lived in. their father had taught them how to survive of the land but now sintal had to learn how to look after his brother. one night on a hunt the boys stumble upon a cave, its small, and there’s a small whisper coming from inside, its too faint to make out. as the boys enter the cave, the ground beneath them begins to quake. they fall down a hole and get separated in the catacombs of these mountains. sintal knows he must find his brother and protect him at all costs. whilst searching for his brother and a way out he comes across and pillar of ghost white stones. a shadowy figure appears, sintal doesn’t know what is happening or what this is, but the figure puts out their hands. a small glimmer of light hits his eyes and is entranced by what the figure is holding. he reaches out and grabs it. He then returns to his brother jexal, while holding a blue stone. the brother then proceeds to exit the cave and re-join with there father. sintal doesn’t tell his brother or father what happened in the cave, but that shadowy figure had given him a treasure to remind him of a God he is yet to discover, but deep down Sintal knows it will be important this would come to be his most treasured item.

    While out exploring one night, the boys discovered an encampment deep within the woods. On further inspection the camp appeared empty with all its occupants out hunting. Sintal edged closer to the tents despite Jexals concerned, suddenly, a bandit charges out of the closet tent tackling Sintal. As they grapple on the ground Sintal manages to scream at Jexal to run, to go get father. the attacker ties sintal up and lock him inside one of the tents, taking all his possessions. sintal was fearing for his brother and fathers’ lives, fearing the worst. so, one-night sintal escapes, kills a guard and gathers up his possessions while taking the coins and weapons of the deceased guard, he flees into the night.


    one day, sintal makes it to a village and hears whispers of a new lands called elpida. he uses what’s left of the stolen coins and buys safe passive to the new land aboard the first ship to elpida. while he waits to leave in the seaside lodge, he begins talking to the local fisherman about Marventa, the goddess of the ocean. he takes this religion upon himself and will protect the ship and its passengers along this voyage to the grand new world…… Elpida.
     
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  2. SickSnickers66

    SickSnickers66 Verified Traveler

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    How long does it take to get my bio verified
     
  3. tcvs

    tcvs Administrator Administrator Developer

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    Someone will be along to review it shortly! Staff in charge of processing bios are located in the UK, so they are asleep currently. You can expect them to get to you soon. :)
     
  4. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hello there!

    Pretty solid bio you have here. However your age doesn’t match the date of birth as the current year year in Elpida is 2405S so your character would be 20 years old. We also don’t have any viking so please change that to either bandits or something else. The server is also a semi-realistic setting so we don’t have any sort of magic that you’ve mentioned in your bio.

    Let us know when you’ve updated it :D
     
  5. SickSnickers66

    SickSnickers66 Verified Traveler

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    I have updated it, replacing Vikings with bandits and taking out the magic, hopefully this is good enough
     
  6. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Thank you!

    Welcome to the server :D
     

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