Username: Markipaca Discord Username: Markipaca Full Name: Ragnar McManus Nickname: Rag Gender: Male Age: 27 Date of birth: 17/03/2378S Place of birth: Unknown Job: Blacksmith Interests and hobbies: Ragnar likes to make his own tools and weapons for when he is out hunting and also enjoys Roman Boxing Religious Belief: Phaedron Signature Items: His Bow, this was his first expertly crafted weapon His Kopis, an expertly crafted greek sword which has been passed down for generations Story Paragraphs: Ragnar McManus was found at the age of 5 in a shipwrecked longship on a small village. Political leaders of the time argued over what to do with the boy who called himself ragnar but eventually came to the conclusion that they would let him live. The boy was adopted into a family and was trained in weaponry and martial arts. He was taught how to use bows, phalanxes, kopis and pugios but however stuck with bows and kopis as he grew up. He was a good archer for his age so when he turned 16 he started to sell meat for his village and it let him pocket some cash. After a while he managed to save up enough money to pay for a blacksmith apprenticeship. Overtime he learnt how to make fine weapons such as his own bow, one of fine quality. His trade allowed him to be a reasonably wealthy man however aftertime his life started to become a routine. Later he started dealing customised weapons to Greek assassins as he gained a reasonable reputation. Ragnar was still learning how to fight in his 20's as he was well known amongst the black market and he wanted to be sure he could defend himself from the thieves and assasins he sold his items to. His weaponry was getting better until the 13/7/2399S, the day his adoptive mother died. Rag was in a hard place and went from dealing to dark people to become a dark person himself. He started selling his services to the average man who needed an assasination done. However this new lifestyle Ragnar had chosen wasn't very accepted with his friends and family. His village may not have had proof yet he was still an outcast from the small village he grew up with, never being allowed to enter again. This pushed Rag further down the path of no return. Ragnar had to village jump to avoid the authorities however he knew that this wouldn't last long. He had been trying to find a way to go back to his normal life ever since he had been able to stop grieving his mother, however he knew the only way to restart life would be to go to a new island where nobody knew of his past. Ragnar set sail into the sea where he tried to locate a new island where he found his answer in the new world known as Elpida. Ragnar new this would be the best way to restart his life however he still wasn't sure of what this new life would entail.
Hi! This bio looks pretty good. However some changes need to be made: It is a bit short, could you add at least 1 more paragraph? While the server is based in the ancient greek/roman period, we have our own lore, so things like Artemis and spartans dont fit into the server. Ireland does not either, avoid giving places names as it would be adding to the lore, Just say you were raised in a village at the coast or something like that. Also it would be nice if you downplayed the "greatest archers for his age" as you can't make yourself to overpowered.
