DarkHooman's Bio

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  1. SaarNat

    SaarNat Verified Traveler

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    Name: Jason Molten
    Nicknames: The Sickler
    Gender: Male
    Age: 28
    Birthdate: 2377S
    Birthplace: A small farm west of Elpida.
    Current residence: The arena quarters in Elpida.
    Job: Gladiator, former farmer (Pun intended).
    Interest and hobbies: Loves money, trains a lot and has an interest in medicine since childhood.
    Dislikes: Slavery and cruel behaviour.
    Religious belief: Follows Metus for his wealth and farming sides, but prays to Ignarus for protection and hope.
    Signature items: Dual extended sickles he uses when fighting, earned him his horrifying nickname. The sickles were with him since the day he left his farm, they mean a great deal to him and remind him of his father.
    Always wears his family pendant around his neck, containing his parents’ pictures.
    Physical Appearance: A muscular man of an average height, and a tanned skin. He has a large, ugly scar on the side of his face from a previous battle in his past and a few whip scars on his back. Jason features green eyes and black hair.
    Personality: Jason is a hopeful person, always looking at the bright side of the situation he’s in, but never ignoring the problems. He has a short fuse, which got him in quite a few troubles in his past life. Currently, he is desperate for help freeing him from whoever it may come from.
    Skills: Jason is particularly skilled in farming and taming animals, mastering both when working as a farmer. His fighting skills were originally achieved through fighting hostile predators attacking his crops and livestock, and his medical skills, which are still basic, were obtained through his childhood interest in the topic.

    Background
    Jason was a low life farmer, living in a small farm located west to Elpida. In his teenager years, his family, which consisted of him, his father, his brother, that was sent to war, and his mother, who died in his early childhood from an incurable decease, was in a poor financial situation. So ignoring his medical interests, he became a farmer and helped his father earn living money.
    One day, three years ago, his farm was raided by thieves and enslavers, killing his father and taking him as a slave and forcing him to fight others for their entertainment. The enslavers sold him to the arena of one of the cities he was taken to, and since then he’s been transported from town to town, to other arenas, making a name for himself being a merciful warrior that spares his foes, yet deadly if mocked. Ranking up in the arenas, he was sent to Elpida under the knowledge that the winner of the next tournament will get the prize he long lust for - Wealth and FREEDOM!

    Small Note
    Hi, since I am not too awesome at English, I used some help from a friend. While I thought up the story, he helped me deepen the plot and add details, and then wrote it for me (Yes he even wrote this small note :p) - I hope this is not considered cheating….
    Anyway, do you recognise this write-style? ;)
     
  2. Nico

    Nico Known Citizen

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    Hey, welcome to the forums! Nice bio so far, however I feel like it's a bit short :/
    You also dont have a profile picture yet, but except for that it's nice nice story :yum
     
  3. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hello and welcome!

    Your bio is a bit short, so maybe try adding a bit more to it. Also your character should be born on the Mainland, and then they move to Elpida. So at the beginning where you wrote he was born in Elpida needs to be changed to Mainland.

    There is no problem with your friend helping you write this. If you have any trouble, you can ask him or anyone on the forum for help.

    Best of luck!
     
  4. SaarNat

    SaarNat Verified Traveler

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    I will try making it a bit longer tomorrow when I speak with Saar XD
    West of Elpida kinda means not in Elpida but.... West of it :/
     
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  5. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Oh I am so sorry. I misread. You are absolutely correct. =)
    If you just add a bit more to it then it'll be perfect.
     
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  6. SaarNat

    SaarNat Verified Traveler

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    Now we just need to think.. With our brains....
    When we find them :p
     

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