Approved Hain's Bio

Discussion in 'Character Bios' started by 55blinging55, May 30, 2016.

  1. 55blinging55

    55blinging55 Citizen

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    Full Name: Hain Liel
    Nickname(s): H (as the letter), was given by his Father.
    Gender: male
    Age: 20
    Date of birth: Born on February 20, 2385S
    Place of birth: A tiny village inside of the mainlands.
    Current residence: No current residence, usually stays inside of inns or somewhere habitable.
    Job: A thief/assassin, who will do pretty much anything for a good bit of cash.
    Interests and hobbies: Hain is a persuasive person, can usually get items for a lower price, and if that doesn't work he'll just 'force' them to 'give' the item to him. Heh. He loves to go around, stealing, doing practically anything to gain money.
    Religious Belief: Follows Phaedron for his evilness.
    Signature Item (s): A shiny iron dagger, with his father's name engraved inside of it in ancient hyrogliphics.



    Hain Liel, a 20 year old man, came from a small village in the mainland. His dream is to become the richest, but nothing other than that. Although he may not be strong he is a swift fellow good with weapons such as daggers and knives, or a bow. He tries to remain hidden and away from guards so they do not arrest him or capture him, breaking his richness dream. Although, he wasn't always a thief, or a bad person. He used to go around the village helping the elderly and doing anything to help it survive, this changed at the age of 16

    At the age of 15, his father was on the verge of death from a deadly disease with no cure, 2 days before he died Hain visited him, he handed his son a shiny iron dagger, of course with his father's very own name carved in it, this means a lot to Hain as his mother passed away when he was 6 and pretty much barely got to know his own mother. After his father's death it was discovered that his father did not have a disease, but in fact was Poisoned to death. The news however, was never carried onto Hain.

    With little to no friends or even foes, other than people who were to hand him in or arrest him, Hain still has hope, and knows he will succeed in his dream one day, even if it takes his entire life to accomplish that goal of being a rich man.
    He hopes for the best in life and is courageous, never giving up no matter what stands in his path, taking on the attributes of his father. He has a passion, to become better each day, with his knives, daggers, and his archery skills.

    Background Info :
    2385S, Hain Liel, was born into a small village in the mainland, Hain was a quiet and in everyone elses eye's, simply just a normal guy, he has a dream: to be the best thief and assassin, atleast in the mainland if not everywhere, each day he works hard towards this goal, attempting to master his weapon skills for his knives or daggers, every day he would do his deed of thieving and make sure he also becomes richer, each time.

    He has 1 friend, which isn't really a person, it's his iron dagger. This is what helps him, and will help him, achieve his dreams to become rich and the best thief out there. Although it's a peculiar dream to become the best thief, he hopes it pleases his god, Phaedron as he believes the god will grant him his dream if he makes him happy.
    Ever since he became bad, and doing wrong.. he thought one theory about his father's death, Phaedron punished Hain for not doing bad, and helping elderly etc around the village he lived in, to Phaedron this was a sin, in return of a sin Hain's father was taken. However, we know the truth of his father's death, poison, one day Hain will most likely hear of this, or be told.. and he will seek revenge on whoever did this to his father.

    Hain Liel has never had a sibling, he never knew what Sharing really was, and if he had to do so from time to time he'd just blankly ignore them and would not do so. He is quite selfish at times, but when he is choosing or deciding on a big choice, he looks at it's fate and how doing one thing could ruin his future, or enlighten it.

    From friends, and rumours he had heard Elpida was filled with glorious riches and a vast amount of wealth, and which thief wouldn't love this? He figured it would help him once again achieve his dream of being wealthy, and perhaps become better with his role of being a thief.
     
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  2. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hello and welcome!
    Few queries regarding your bio.
    1) Your character was born in 2384S but they are 20 years old. The current year in Elpida is 2405S, so they should be 21 years old?
    2) Can you write a bit regarding your characters decision to travel to Elpida?
    3) Criminal activities such as being a thief or assassin are not really looked upon highly in Elpida. You are free to choose them ofcourse, but it wouldn't put you in a necessarily good position with other players and NPCs. Let this be a note to other players, aswell as yourself, as we are having a large number of people choosing to be a thief or assassin.
    Great bio so far.
    Good luck!
     
  3. 55blinging55

    55blinging55 Citizen

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    Heh, meant to be 20 but I made a typo in the year, meant to be 2385S.
    Will work on the decision.
    Edited the thread
     
  4. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Thanks for the cooperation and welcome to Frontiers!
    Message @tcvs to get your prototype badge and server access.
    Best of luck!
     
  5. Saphiria

    Saphiria Retired Staff Retired Staff

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    Congrats! I hope you enjoy the server a lot. Best of luck to you, and I hope to see you in game.
     
  6. Xalveris

    Xalveris Known Citizen

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    Welcome! Bio is relatively good, although I think it's a bit short.
     

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