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Approved Odilia's Biography

Discussion in 'Character Bios' started by Odilia Brumen, Jan 12, 2020.

  1. Odilia Brumen

    Odilia Brumen Verified Traveler

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    Username: RiddlySyv
    Discord Username: Riddly #8577
    Full Name: Odilia Le Brumen
    Nickname(s): Odi
    Gender: Female
    Age: 20
    Date of birth: 10/01/2386S
    Place of birth: Small farmtown southwest of Mainland
    Job: Baker
    Interests and hobbies: Farming, baking, cooking, strolling around, singing
    Religious Belief: Worships Aestheria and Metus
    Signature Item (s): Bronze locket

    Story Paragraphs: Odilia was born the second of seven siblings, her father was a farmer and her mother a baker. She started working the land at an early age to support her family, waking up early before the sun appeared over the horizon and gathering wheat all day until sunset became her lifestyle. She used to cheerfuly sing all the songs the old ladies at the farm taught her, and soon they realized she had a good voice. From then onwards, she would fill the town gatherings, parties and festivities with her warm voice.

    When she was 16 years old, she recieved a bronze locket from her father, a family heirloom, he said. It wasn't a masterpiece, but it was something very cherished by her since it had the family name "Brumen" carved in it.

    One day, some years later, a wealthy merchant stopped by their humble town, and while he was resting at the town square, he heard Odilia's voice carried by the wind. He followed the voice, and found the young girl kneading some dough for bread at her mother's bakery. He went in, and offered her to travel with him to Elpida, where she could work as a baker while trying to make herself a name with her singing.
     
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  2. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hello there!

    Bio is shaping up quite nicely, however it does need 1 more paragraph on your character's decision to move to Elpida. Also can you add a full date of birth, as in day and month aswell?

    Thanks!
     
  3. Odilia Brumen

    Odilia Brumen Verified Traveler

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    It is explained right in the last paragraph ^^'.
     
  4. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Alrighty thank you!
     

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