Full Name: Legatonin Nickname(s): Savage Legan Gender: Male Age: 23 Date of birth: 2382S Place of birth: Mainland Current residence: Elpida Job: Exploring Miner (Explorer, Miner) Interests and hobbies: Sweet shining Diamonds, Wealthy riches of Gold, Power of Redstone, Mysteries of Lapiz, Scorching Coal. Exploring new places underground and aboveground, searching locations filled with much treasure abd riches. Religious Belief: Ignarus, Metus Signature Item (s): Diamond leather gloves, his hand protection from hurting his hand from mining, also a memento of his old home. Dark goggles, an instrument given by the merchants he encountered that helps him see in the dark unless activated.. Backstory: Abandoned in the woods after birth, saved by passing Miners who were doing an expedition for new riches between the grassy plains and a dark forest, he was picked up, brought up and was raised by them. As he grew up, all what was given to him was work, work and more work, cast aside because the people thought that he was different, not because he's human of mysterous origins, but because he had some skill in the art of mining, and that made other the locals jealous. Because of his luck with the pickaxe, often of the places he mined yield good riches and that made them want to take him for themselves, to the brink of desperity. Escaping that hell hole of a home, his plan to was to reach a destination, his passion to explore flared him to leave. Packing his bags of ,what he could steal from what he called "Parents", food, light, and many other resources that is needed for the journey, mining straight, left and right, up and down, untill he struck a cave system, leading him aboveground, to the place he never thought he could go. Dirty as he may look, arms swollen from continuous mining, eyes were red, and hungry for days, he mustered up strength and he was able to make it to the exit. Thoughts of the new lands was filling his head with glee, new sceeneries gave color to his mind, and new holes for him to dig and mine for treasures(lel). From a barren childhood to an experiencing adulthood, this was what he was looking for. As his exploration goes, he crossed paths with travelling merchants, meeting new faces, and unfamiliar races. In there, he was able to sell his stores to the merchants in exchange to giving him a job as one of them, They agreed, him excited and thrilled that there is a new chapter to his life, replacing the bad memories of his childhood to a fruitful adulthood. To Elpida he go. PS: Please tell me which and what's wrong with my biography, so i can make changes and make it more balanced. PS: Is this realistic enough?