Approved Character bio: Thelynn Oboro (fixed hopefully)

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  1. Wizard_Druntor

    Wizard_Druntor Traveler

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    Username: wizard_druntor
    Discord Username: Druntor #2410
    Full Name: Thelynn Oborosa
    Nickname(s): Oboro, Legaros' eye (non-offical Title)
    Gender: Male
    Age: 24
    Date of birth: 2381S, he doesn't know the month or day as the guard didn't know how long the baby had been left on the streets, but celebrates it on the 13th of April.
    Place of birth: Born in a ghetto had to work day and night just to survive and eat
    Job: Bounty Hunter
    Interests and hobbies: when not hunting targets, Oboro likes to tend to his garden and will often help down at the smithy for free, likes to read romance novels, trains in his swordsmanship and archery and works out to keep in peak shape for his "hunts".
    Religious Belief: Legaros: He, being a bounty hunter, believes heavily in the justice of the gods and in following the laws of the state and that any that break those rules should be punished with little to no mercy. (has a necklace with a symbol of Legaros that he holds and prays with before and after every "hunt".
    Signature Item (s): Iron Song: his Iron Sword uniquely crafted as it makes a high pitched ringing sound when swung.
    Religious Necklace: portraying a symbol of Legaros, after every hunt he takes he takes time at home to pray to Legaros as it gives him clarity that what he is doing is right and justified not only legally but also morally, he also uses as a way for him to "communicate" to his dad.

    Story Paragraphs: Oboro was born in ghetto, cast out as his parents believed he was cursed as he was born with heterochromia with one eye being blue and the other was yellow, having pity on him a guard picked him up from the streets and housed him till he was 7 years old then the guard was sent out to fight off a bandit raid leaving him with his necklace, he died in the battle that ensued leaving Oboro without a home. Thus he grew up on the streets of the mainland working part time for the smithy, florist, and in the local library where he gained his love for flowers and gardening, romance novels and where he later on made his sword Iron Song. Oboro made Iron Song on his 10th birthday where he tested out a strange design his father gave him, after returning from one of his expeditions, for his sword carving holes on the centre of the blade which cause the blade to "sing" every time it was swung and since he meticulously maintains his blade as his father taught him to do saying 'a warrior with no respect nor care for his weapon will surely be failed by it for a blade is strengthened by the spirit of its master'.

    One day while working for the smithy a thief stole one of the swords he had made for the captain of the guard, without hesitation Oboro chased after the grown man and tackled him to the ground and tried to take the blade from him, scraping for the sword he left himself open the the man punched Oboro and Oboro punched back starting a dirty scrap fight in the streets. the guards came running to the sound of the fighting and restrained them both, the guards picking up the thief and restraining Oboro 'this crazed boy attacked me' said the thief hiding the stolen blade in his coat 'because he stole that sword the smith had been working on for the captain of the guard' said Oboro the guards then searched the man quickly finding the sword, the smithy then came running and confirmed what Oboro had said to the guards and the man was arrested and Oboro was praised for his efforts and quick reflexes and was invited to join the guards i two years time when he would be of age to Oboro took this as a way to remember and honour his father. after joining up he quickly showed his aptitude for combat and stamina becoming the star of the trainees but he was always being berated for being too brutal and animalistic in his tactics and fighting. after his 10 years of training his peers had all graduated and became guards but he did not, that night the captain of the guard came to his bed in the barracks and told Oboro to follow him, the captain took him to the bounty hunters guild where the captain told him 'your talents would be wasted and criticised if you became a guard thus i have talked with the guild master into signing you up here as a bounty hunter where your skills will be recognised and celebrated, here you will be going after targets guards cant catch and you'll be better paid too' leaving him at the guild. after 2 years with a few slip ups, a few escaped targets with all to many a scar and bruise he became a dependable bounty hunter and was renowned for his skills. eventually he was able to save up enough money to get his own house where he kept his own library and flower garden thanks to the skills he was taught, he still visits and works with the smithy and will visit the florist and library as well while he has no bounties to work on.

    a few weeks into the new year a messenger knocked on his door with a letter for him saying that the council is extending control to a new land and will need a person of his skills to help the guards in keeping the peace there as new lands brings new dangers and potential hazardous people and that he will be expected at the docks upon sunrise. immediately he started packing some of his gear including his armour, his sword and his fathers necklace, he started walking around saying goodbye to his friends telling them that he is leaving for a new land, with a few tears and some heartfelt goodbyes he slept one last night in his home and woke up early and ran down to the docks and boarded the boat off to the new land and new adventures...
     
    Last edited: Dec 21, 2019
  2. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Hiya!

    @org36 will go over your bio update soon. Just to let you know, i am deleting your old bio because its a duplicate.
     
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  3. org36

    org36 Citizen Ambassador

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    Ah, I forgot to mention - your background/story is a bit on the shorter side. Perhaps you could write a paragraph on your Signature Item(s)? That should be all. (And yes, you did the date right).

    PS: There's an edit button on the post, so you can just edit it and we'll look it over again. Don't need to make a new thread for it. ;P
     
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  4. org36

    org36 Citizen Ambassador

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    Okay, looks good. Approved!

    Side note: Signature Items are unavailable at the start (lore reason is that they're confiscated when players arrive in Elpida, if you have it when you arrive), so you won't be able to actually use your trident until it's "given" back to you.
     

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