Username: played14 Discord Username: snowy played14#8635 Full Name: Cody revel Gender: Male Age: 25 Date of birth: He was born in 2380S January 30 Place of birth: mainland far inland Job: Smithing armor and weapons Interests and hobbies: Crafting weapons and selling items Religious Belief: Ignarus Signature Item (s): a smithing hammer Background: Cody revel was born in a small town on the mainland. His family was not very rich but they had a good business that made enough profit to survive each winter. His family were blacksmiths by trade and so he was trained to be one as well. His father came to him one day and showed him a hammer. He told him you will one day use this hammer and forge the best swords possible with the resources you get. When he was a wee lad they did not have a school system. His parents weren’t the richest to let him go to school so his mother had to teach him how to talk and speak the correct language. His father disagreed with this and would always say to his mother: “that boy don’t need to learn words, he needs to learn how to work”. But his mother put her foot down and taught him how to work and read, although he never really did get the hang of it. At the same time his father started training him into a blacksmith. His training took many years, but he finally earned his rank as a blacksmith. To celebrate this his father gave him his first smithing hammer. They worked together for a few years and all was well. Then they had an especially bad year and it became apparent that he would not be able to stay with his father. Cody revel thought maybe if he left there would be more business somewhere else because in his hometown they didn’t sell much product because they were specialized in weaponry and since the end of the barbarian wars that didn’t sell very well anymore. Cody always wanted to be a big time blacksmith and he now has the chance to become that in the new town of Elpida where he’ll get a new start. He would bring his smithing hammer that his father gave him as he had used it forever and will always use the hammer to craft all of the items that he would sell. He hopes that the people at Elpida will want the weapons and armor that I will craft for them. He wishes he could’ve moved his family down to the elpidia with him but they wished to stay, though he could return anytime he wanted to.
Hi! Nice to see you changed it, however it's still a bit to short. We expect about double this at the minimum. Also there are some grammatical errors in the bio, so if it's possible pls see if you can change that.
Your biography looks fine, aside from the job that you've listed. It's supposed to be what your character wishes to do before he arrives in Elpida - which means he doesn't know about the EFP yet (and the EFP doesn't even exist yet ingame). Just changing it to Blacksmith or something should suffice. You'll be free to be part of the EFP force when the EFP has formed, just not before - so this shouldn't affect any of your plans.
