Approved Daen

Discussion in 'Character Bios' started by XDiamondGuyX, Jul 10, 2016.

  1. XDiamondGuyX

    XDiamondGuyX Traveler

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    Full Name : Daen Middlestone
    Gender : Male
    Age: 20
    Date of Birth : June 21 2385S
    Place of birth : Small village in the country side
    Current residence : No current residence usally stays in inns or somewhere habital
    Job : Theif and assassin
    Hobbies / intrests : Target Practice
    Signature Items : a Golden Bow with a skull on it
    Religion : Follows Phaedron for his evilness
    Nicknames : He Doesnt have 1
    Daen Middlestone a 20 year old man, came from a little village in the countryside. His dream become the most wealthy
    and a few small other things. Although he may not be the strongest but he isn't weak he is a swift fellow good with weapons such as bows and knives, or a sword. He Tries to avoid Guards because hes been in jail before and is still wanted due to breaking out. He was always a thief, and a bad person. He used roam the village, pranking the residents and being evil.

    At the age of 14, his mother was on the verge of death from a deadly disease with no cure, 1 days before she died Daen visited her, she handed his son a shiny Golden Bow with a skull on it, this means a lot to Daen as his Father passed away when he was 2 and pretty much barely got to know his own father. After his mother's death it was discovered that his father did not have a disease, but in fact was Poisoned to death. The news however, was never carried onto Daen.

    With very few friends or even foes, other than people who were to hand him in or arrest him, Daen still has hope, and knows he will succeed in his dream one day, even if it takes his entire life to accomplish that goal of being a very wealthy man. He hopes for the best in life and is courageous, never giving up no matter what stands in his path, taking on the attributes of his father. He has a passion, to become better each day, with his knives, daggers, and his archery skills.

    He has no friends now. But he will still try achieve his dreams to become rich and the best thief out there. Although it's a peculiar dream to become the best thief, he hopes it pleases his god, Phaedron as he believes the god will grant him his dream if he makes him happy.
    Ever since he became bad, and doing wrong.. he thought one theory about his mother's death, Phaedron punished Daen for not doing bad, Daen thought he done well being bad in the village with all those pranks around the village he lived in, to Phaedron this was a sin, not bad enough, in return of a sin Daen's father was taken. However, we know the truth of his mother's death, poison, one day Daen will most likely hear of this, or be told.. and he will seek revenge on whoever did this to his mother.

    When He became 20, he decided to move to a place called Elpida, he thought he would have a better chance at becoming rich, could seize more items in a wealthy place and make more friends in the town, since he had nothing left in his village.
     
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  2. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Welcome to Frontiers.
    Your bio is coming along nicely, although there are a few minor grammatical mistakes. You will also need to write a bit about why your character decided to move to Elpida. You are also missing an avatar, which is required.
    Good luck!
     
  3. Saphiria

    Saphiria Retired Staff Retired Staff

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    Looks like you made the above changes, I like it.
     
  4. 55blinging55

    55blinging55 Citizen

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    I like it <3
     
  5. Alir99

    Alir99 The Guy Who Does Stuff Moderator Community Team

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    Thank you.
    Message @tcvs to get your prototype badge and server access.
    Best of luck!
     
  6. Tomas

    Tomas Owner Owner Administrator

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    You are all set! :)
     

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